Re:More to rate
Date Posted:07/08/2010 8:43 PMCopy HTML
Overall: Maybe you should switch to clone brush rather than erasing. Depending on what program you use. And trying different textures would not be a bad idea.
Nina 1: Your texture is too heavy. Fonts don't really work. Color could be a lot brighter or cleaner. Placement of the pictures is really good tho.
Succubus: Picture frames have a place, however, it isn't on this banner. The placement isn't as good as the first. Color's flat. The black is too harsh on that barely there purple. Font doesn't play well with the rest of the banner.
Nina 2: WAY too big. Texture doesn't match. The little inkblot is a nice touch, but you could have layered it on top of one of the pictures and saved all that negative space at the top. Color is once again washed out.
Shadow: Really cutsey, and I'm not sure if that's what you were going for. Yes I know, couples banners tend to be cutsey, but this one just seems kinda, wrong. Washed out in some places, popping in others. Popping is good, but not with the uber blasae background. And I probably wouldn't have stacked the pictures right on top of each other, it provides all this negative space that you choose to fill with stars. I like the slogan font on this one. It fits what you're saying. But the names, are again, a miss.
Don't throw them in the trash though, learn from them. Use the pictures natural backgrounds to your benefit, they take up the negative space and eliminate the choppy eraser lines. Keep trying.
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